Well you can't please everyone. The hits on the Tool riffs work. I was struggling to find something for that section. At least the singer can actually sing. I wouldn't describe Tool as grungy thrash noise, they are a bunch of musos, but if you don't like their style, well you're not going to like it.
Finished version? That's it mate. It's an 8 minute stand alone video, it's not a trailer for something else. That's pretty much all the best shots I had from 3 sessions, there was only a few moves I left out. Making it longer would be padding.
Software wise Vegas, after effects, photoshop. As for Kitejam. I'm having a look at the footage but to be honest I don't think there's enough to do something with... it would be kiting to music with nothing else, I don't really like that kind of video