Excellent first attempt.
Keep up the good work.

Cheers

AB

Awesome work man great stuff

great work. that backroll to blind with a pass is the next trick i want to do and iv been looking everyware to see one. thanks allot man great vid

great first effort - like your title intro

a few tips to make it even better:

1.deinterlace the movie or shoot progressive if you have the ability in camera - computer monitors hate interlacing - my eyes feel like they have been through a cheese grater.

2.Upload a larger file to youtube - that will bump up the picture quality alot. Youtube actually does a pretty good job these days. The final file size / download time will be the same.

3.Try and use the tripod more - there are some really shakey shots in there.

4.shorter and snappier is better - cut out the just kiting around stuff.

try and get some sound happening.

There is no such thing as a perfect movie (unless you look at Andy Gordon's stuff - and even he would always find ways to do it better in retrospect) - which is what makes movie making such a fascinating craft.


These are all mistakes i have made in the past...

cool vid leon only critism is you wasted two beers trying to catch them.. sacralidge!

Nice effort mate.
Agree on the de-interlace comment, but that is easy to fix.